Monday, July 04, 2005

me

im the devil
lord of evil
i hate life, im the lord of death
im not the one whos lost the way
im the one who leads astray
i feast on the mortal ego of beings
i suck on the grief to which they cling
with awe all your eyes look at me
but im the one you fear to be
i charge free for what i give
god gives you life, i show you how to live
i preach you what they tell are lies
i teach you the truth to realise
you are me, and i am you
learn the facts before you are through
impulse, desire, pleasure is me
free, free, i am free, so you could be
kill the saint, and burn the church
around the bend your demons lurch
kill em all, and you wont be free
come over, join hands with me
with me you are on your wildest ride
i will take you to the other side.

5 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

u write well but
why ur poems malevolent and marked by inuiqity?
can't u write abt without evilness and malefic forces.
ur writing seems transformation against supression towards evil means evil against evilness
it could be other way round.

9:43 AM  
Blogger feignman said...

mr anonymous i think i have always failed to see why the "evil" is so hated, i prescribe to my own brand of evil with its own parameters :) and bout the always-writing-dark part i would say that maybe i am just using these tools as the window to the darkness, and to take everyone to the other side (im the devil remember) . there are other simple psychological explanations as well, but i prefer analogical stuff.

12:53 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I agreed with ur arguements but i m wondering, if u write so well abt dark part, u can be well talented in exploring bright side too.
Isn't it.
I would like to read if u write one abt it.

5:13 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i would love to try

9:52 PM  
Blogger Ankur Shanker said...

Hey feignman..i thoroughly enjoyed ur poem. u really write well.

9:53 PM  

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