no more
the spirit is killed, hung to death
chopped to pieces, burned to red
no flutter of wings, no nod of head
some stories should be left unsaid
he flies no more
tries to rise no more
no not any skies no more
prodded in the eyes he may
but son of sorrow cries no more
tears of blood are, to be seen
of the colour of flights that have been
shadow that crawled across the seas
is reduced to rubble, its freedom ceased
mourners come to wash their feet
bring gifts of solace wrapped in sheets
white sheets that hide their grins of glee
as purely white was love to be..
wont be white no more
nothing wrong or right no more
love with halo light no more
love is life, she used to say
so love again he might no more
on top of where she was to wait
he flew, opened his eyes too late
stood guards of hell with arrows drawn
the sky was red like the sun of dawn
fell to her feet like a bird of tame
she stood unflustered as down he came
he saw in her eyes, he was to blame
he loved her more than she was game
in the arms of devil he saw her leave
laid there in the night, alone to grieve
he breathed his last, his back to the sky
it rained of blood, till his veins ran dry
there he lies no more
no nocturnal sighs no more
love, a lie, he buys no more
life goes on, as well it may
in the name of love, he dies no more.
41 Comments:
i am truly speechless
speechless? thanks if it is because u found it good ;) but i would have been more thankful if i knew who u were..
amol
really the best poem i have read....
thanks but who would u be, really??
Love
My lost lady
Lost in the peril
Once but enough
I beget
The regret
Never stood fast
And I forget
Yes my friend
No more
Love
My lost lady
Lost in the peril
Once but enough
I beget
The regret
Never stood fast
And I forget
Yes my friend
No more
no more than ever
let man decide whatever
but there ll b no love
till there is feigning
feignman
no more
never
anonymous..good work. but only the first one, the second one sounds like u r trying to feign yourself or me for that matter :)
well i tried to feign both of us not a bit
its useless to feign feignman
and i dont fit
-------anonymous#2
cool man..its really gud...m really impressed....i dint kno u rite so well...
cool yaar....its really gud man....m really impressed..i dint kno u rite dat well...
why 2 comments bhai?
by mistake 2 baar submit hogaya.....
is shruti ur bhai??...muhahahaha (The ravana laugh)
bol toh main tujhe bhi bahut kuch deta hun..(c or bc for example) tu hai kya??? ;)
@ anonymous
i read ur poems again. i love them now..i must know now what they mean. finally. thank u for sharing that.. i must say, start a blog.
bhai or bc me bahut difference hota hai..muhahahahaha
akhir ye anonymous kaun hai?..pata chala kya tujhe?
wahi toh main bhi keh raha hun ki bahut farak hota hai..aur tu losing side par hai..
ya i think who it is..
hey u rite very well!!! m really impressed..u seem 2 be a really interstin guy.wud u like 2 b frnz? i m kinda crazy abt u ...do reply.
hahahahahhahahhahahahahhahahhaha
wait....*taking a deep breath*
hahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahaha
wos so funny abt it?
i dont know..i like to laugh.. laughter therapy i would say..and if u have actually read my posts i have mentioned that "strangest of things amuse me"..neways who ru?
ok...k...n ya m raashi ;)
oh i hadnt expected u wud tell me so much more about u that i didnt know..i am trying hard to keep all the information in my head at the same time..wow!!!! hehe..and seeing ur past record id give u a hint..hint: sarcasm)
wot do u mean by my past record??? u dnt kno me....
urgh!! okay fine i didnt mean anything..nothing at all!! all i would say is 'thank you for the appreciation'..nethin else??
u dint ans my question???
neither did you!!! neways which one??
ki wud u b my frnd or nt? ;)
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do i know u?
wot do u think??? do u kno me or nt?? ;)
i dont think so...
gud...nw guess who i m?
nt gud!!...n m tired!! ba ba..
chhi...wot a spoil sport...u disaapointd me.. :((((
believe me!! there IS no sport :) n im getting too bugged now..
dats da motive dear....lolz ;)))))
i can see that...thank u
i want to know from u this confeesional poety or fictional one.
anyway it's grt
anonymous saahab...kya karenge jaan ke..padhiye aur pasand aaye toh enjoy kijiye..:)
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